from a text message to whom i Love

10 Comments

from a text message to whom i Love





i am
 in
your
 heart
 
your
 soul
is the garden
 that surrounds
me

 your
spirit
 is
my
breath

 your
 life
my
only
 temple

i am
 in
your
 heart

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Luwonda commented on from a text message to whom i Love

01-28-2011

Very good poem! I like the tone, rhythm and images. I like the metaphors of heart, soul and garden.

Tempestlady commented on from a text message to whom i Love

12-03-2010

Wonderful expression and emotion. Loved the flow and the concise direct clarity. Simply wonderful.....write on.....

optimistic commented on from a text message to whom i Love

12-01-2010

Congrads to the significant other she is really going to be emotional over this one good write.

Artie commented on from a text message to whom i Love

09-11-2010

This is a fantastic write, overflowing with emotion - 10 from me

jj1562 commented on from a text message to whom i Love

07-17-2010

i love how you can put so much emotion in so few words

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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