from a text message to whom i Love
i am
in
your
heart
your
soul
is the garden
that surrounds
me
your
spirit
is
my
breath
your
life
my
only
temple
i am
in
your
heart
from a text message to whom i Love
10 Comments
i am
in
your
heart
your
soul
is the garden
that surrounds
me
your
spirit
is
my
breath
your
life
my
only
temple
i am
in
your
heart
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Poem Comments
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Luwonda commented on from a text message to whom i Love
01-28-2011
- Very good poem! I like the tone, rhythm and images. I like the metaphors of heart, soul and garden.
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Tempestlady commented on from a text message to whom i Love
12-03-2010
- Wonderful expression and emotion. Loved the flow and the concise direct clarity. Simply wonderful.....write on.....
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optimistic commented on from a text message to whom i Love
12-01-2010
- Congrads to the significant other she is really going to be emotional over this one good write.
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Artie commented on from a text message to whom i Love
09-11-2010
- This is a fantastic write, overflowing with emotion - 10 from me
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jj1562 commented on from a text message to whom i Love
07-17-2010
- i love how you can put so much emotion in so few words
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