From the Dream We Soon Shall Awake

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    From the Dream We Soon Shall Awake






    On the edge
    center of time and eternity
    feeling
    your heart pounding,
    knowing your thoughts
    seeing you
    in your dreams
    seeking me

    On the edge
    center of time and eternity
    feeling
    my heart pounding,
    knowing my thoughts
    seeing me
    in my dreams
    seeking you

    both
    of us
    longing
    for
    the present
    to
    be over
    hands
    lips
    no longer
    seeking
    but
    holding
    touching

    joy
    ripping
    the smoke
    of others
    fading plans
    drifting away
    from us

    laughter melting
    encasing ice
    that sheltered
    our growing hearts
    from damage

    as
    the separation
    finally ends
    I
    smell
    taste
    feel
    your
    heat growing

    I
    await
    becoming
    the ultimate hardness
    you desire
    to melt around

    we both
    leave
    the pasts
    behind
    like
    so much dust

    I drop
    my softness
    to be
    your hardness
    you drop
    your hardness
    to be
    the softness
    that envelopes
    me completely
    like salmon spawning
    or swans
    no other
    is there
    for us
    but us
    fingers intertwined
    we approach
    the center

    recognizing
    home
    is when
    we are
    one

    we laugh
    together
    with
    the same heart
    ringing
    ripping
    the silence
    away
    forever

    On the edge
    center of time and eternity
    feeling
    our hearts pounding,
    knowing our thoughts
    seeing us
    in our dreams
    seeking us
    till we awaken
    in each others arms again





    © 2009 origionalmerlin



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    Luwonda commented on From the Dream We Soon Shall Awake

    02-23-2011

    Lovely poem! I like the imagination and the tone. The similes of the swans, home and the dream. Nice!

    LeslieMay commented on From the Dream We Soon Shall Awake

    11-18-2009

    Very nice! Erotic without being slutty. :) This is an excellent piece of work. I can feel the passion in your words. Good job!

    SavVySam commented on From the Dream We Soon Shall Awake

    10-15-2009

    Oh my! This is exquisite! I was breathless with the loving intensity of this piece! This is the feeling I tried to convey in a work of mine (Joined Together). Wonderful poem!

    JellyBeanPuddin commented on From the Dream We Soon Shall Awake

    08-29-2009

    I love how this one flows and is put together- it gives me goose bumps.

    Kes commented on From the Dream We Soon Shall Awake

    07-19-2009

    I really apperciate this one. Love the way it should always be

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