OZ isn't me

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    OZ isn't me






    said the scarecrow to the tin man
    i don't know where to start
    said the tin man to the scarecrow
    i just don't have the heart
    under the rainbow the lion crys again
    i haven't the courage to do this thing
    don't know how to start at all, or even when
    i am no toto
    and Dorthy is a fiction
    i don't do no no-no's
    i just use my pen





    © 2009 origionalmerlin





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    towersongs commented on OZ isn't me

    09-07-2009

    Another good one from your pen. Remember to refill with ink and keep writing.

    knight4696 commented on OZ isn't me

    08-30-2009

    Great use of imagery and creativity. I love the OZ theme and loved the ending line. - I just use my pen.

    wwjd72 commented on OZ isn't me

    08-03-2009

    intrigued as well as grimiced,intoxicated and I see a reader as well as a wiitty writter.I wonder how many even know how well you paint with words?

    Strider commented on OZ isn't me

    07-21-2009

    You are truely a poet and am I glad we fall under the same zodiac sign, maybe that's why I relate easily with your poems.

    ginga commented on OZ isn't me

    07-15-2009

    I like the conversational way you have constructed the verse. Interesting and clever write! Ginga

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