one whole we
ok
we be
not
half
and half
but
we be
one whole
we
one whole we
9 Comments
Tags: Philosophy , Love
ok
we be
not
half
and half
but
we be
one whole
we
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NativeAmeriGirl commented on one whole we
09-27-2010
- Profoundly telling.....you gave me pause, muchas gracias......siempre, Native
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1990lh commented on one whole we
04-30-2010
- hahaha i like this simple, yet profound. nice job write on.
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dancinghawk commented on one whole we
04-30-2010
- love the quirky rhythm to this tiny piece that says so much ... makes me think of yin and yang ... nice work! -dh
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alb29oclfl commented on one whole we
04-30-2010
- to be I, is to stand alone. well done my friend...............................
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