one whole we

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one whole we

  






 ok  
we be
 not
half
 and half
 but
we be
 one whole
 we

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NativeAmeriGirl commented on one whole we

09-27-2010

Profoundly telling.....you gave me pause, muchas gracias......siempre, Native

1990lh commented on one whole we

04-30-2010

hahaha i like this simple, yet profound. nice job write on.

dancinghawk commented on one whole we

04-30-2010

love the quirky rhythm to this tiny piece that says so much ... makes me think of yin and yang ... nice work! -dh

alb29oclfl commented on one whole we

04-30-2010

to be I, is to stand alone. well done my friend...............................

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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