When She Loves Me

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When She Loves Me











ahhhh when she loves me
my soul sings so loud
the angels all go quiet
ahhhh when she holds me
no words need flow
all time passes away
into the hush
of eternity
ahhhh I am
her property
for eternity
in her I trust
in her I lust
in her is the
quiet vision of waking bliss
of all that can be holy
ahhhh I love her
and no other
eternally
hers
am
I






©  April 2010. origionalmerlin



























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Alyse commented on When She Loves Me

04-20-2010

Oh my, this is a beautiful poem.. I love it. and I love how you form it into an picture.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Typo Blues 15
Closest Call (part 2 (not fiction or a poem) 1
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Enlightenment 1
When She Loves Me 6
All Night 1
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Wings 3
Angels shall sing thee to rest 1
The Coming Of The Queen 0
Mnogiye veshi ( Russian) 1
Dyerzhi moi ruki 1
Momenti lyubvi 1
Now I lay me... 4
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Sorry Dante 12
Moments With You. 10
Many Things 4
If the World were a Bed 10
Eternity 16
From the Dream We Soon Shall Awake 22
"All Night AS Well" 10
Presently 3
Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeat
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The Touch Within 11
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Marathon 4
Flowers 7
Camelot 16
OZ isn't me 12
Hold my hand often 22
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Momenti , {Moments of Love } 11
unspoken connotations 9
Coffee and Sex 30
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