"All Night AS Well"

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"All Night AS Well"






{(( I could read
your mind all day
thoughts that are silent
not word ramblings chatter
as you cognize this,
react
to something
with other things))}

I want
to dwell
within
the silences
simmering
between
waves
of orgasm
and wonder

find me
consistently
as the glow
warms you
to your toes
your smile
broadening
the now
we both share

{(( I could read
your mind all day
thoughts that are silent
not word ramblings chatter
as you cognize this,
react
to something
with other things))}

all night as well...






© 2007 origionalmerlin


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symash commented on "All Night AS Well"

07-08-2009

are you writing these poems during the act or right after ..cuz you sure have a lot of feeling in your words...me...well maybe i should of grabbed the pen instead of a smoke ... i would of became a great poet like you.

papertears commented on "All Night AS Well"

07-06-2009

This one I like also....I like the way you flow and the choice of the layout of your words on the bed. lol

kdarcy commented on "All Night AS Well"

05-25-2009

Well done, interesting open and close ... like that, two short and meaningful verses in-between, " to dwell within the silences " excellent.

queenladyt247 commented on "All Night AS Well"

04-29-2009

I love how you chose the way you were feeling. Very deep feel of emotions also sexy.

MONET12 commented on "All Night AS Well"

04-28-2009

I LIKE THIS POEM IT IS REALLY GOOD. NICE CHOICE WITH WORDS!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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All Night 1
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Wings 3
Angels shall sing thee to rest 1
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