Smiling
Damn straight
it is you
that makes
We
worth
it
(Laughter)
I
Love
you
too
sweetheart
Smiling
6 Comments
Poem Commentary
this is a statement of fact in absolute accuracy.. deal with itDamn straight
it is you
that makes
We
worth
it
(Laughter)
I
Love
you
too
sweetheart
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Poem Comments
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02-21-2011
- Short Simple and to the point! To many thing these days are complex, it's nice to read something that isn't!!! Good read! 10 from me!
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Musicmynded1 commented on Smiling
02-14-2011
- Very craftily spontaneity no doubt, nice and sweet.
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tenderpoison commented on Smiling
01-02-2011
- I do love this - what more need be said right? She's a lucky girl (and I love the (laughter) ) - it's what it should be.
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HIP13044b commented on Smiling
12-23-2010
- Short, sweet, and to the point. Much said with very little. Nicely done.
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ahardwalk commented on Smiling
11-28-2010
- Short yet so cute!! Reading this brings a smile to my face!!
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