Smiling

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    Poem Commentary

    this is a statement of fact in absolute accuracy.. deal with it

    Smiling



    Damn straight
     
     it  is  you
     that makes 
    We
    worth
    it
    (Laughter)

    I
    Love  
    you
     too
     sweetheart

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    Viper89 commented on Smiling

    02-21-2011

    Short Simple and to the point! To many thing these days are complex, it's nice to read something that isn't!!! Good read! 10 from me!

    Musicmynded1 commented on Smiling

    02-14-2011

    Very craftily spontaneity no doubt, nice and sweet.

    tenderpoison commented on Smiling

    01-02-2011

    I do love this - what more need be said right? She's a lucky girl (and I love the (laughter) ) - it's what it should be.

    HIP13044b commented on Smiling

    12-23-2010

    Short, sweet, and to the point. Much said with very little. Nicely done.

    ahardwalk commented on Smiling

    11-28-2010

    Short yet so cute!! Reading this brings a smile to my face!!

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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