"MEMORY LANE"

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    "MEMORY LANE"

    MEMORY LANE"

    Running down the lane at dawn's early mist
    I've just heard the news
    Your car and body in such a twist

    Someone said you were calling my name
    Amongst the tangled metal and broken parts
    I know fully well, you'll never be the same!

    When I arrive, you are already gone
    All I have left is the memories and our song!

    Dori Wheeler  18july09

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    SilvioAm commented on "MEMORY LANE"

    10-07-2009

    Very nice poem although a bit sad but the feelings can be felt
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    quickwrite commented on "MEMORY LANE"

    09-01-2009

    I really felt the strong emotions in this poem, I feel the anticipation, and the heartbreak. However, I felt the last stanza loses the mood of the rest of the poem. Aside from that, brillant job!
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    Krystle commented on "MEMORY LANE"

    08-11-2009

    Wow this is so sad! I like it alot though! Great job!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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