As I Lay Sleeping

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    As I Lay Sleeping

    As I lay sleeping

    I searched through my restless mind

    Looking for answers to every question I find

    Night becomes day

    Day becomes nigh

    Is there anything before or after?

    I want to know why

    Before; there was pre-time?

    After; is there any human kind?

    These are the questions that came to mind

    No sense it make when I put them to words

    As I lay sleeping this is what I heard.

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    susanismith commented on As I Lay Sleeping

    04-15-2010

    Being confused usually leads to great inspiration, turning writers to great poets. You flowed beautifully. I've had nights of unrest, because my mind fills up with questions after questions, and mostly about faith. It is unexplainable, but it does exist. You will your answers, just let it come naturally. Sometimes when we search we miss it all together. Have you had something just happen without explaination, or that gut feeling that tells you to do one thing, when you want to do something else. That is faith tugging at you. Your conscience is your holy spirit talking with you. Like GucciGurl said, just believe! This was a very beautiful write. Thanks for the read.
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    GucciGurl commented on As I Lay Sleeping

    12-21-2009

    After a time of struggle and heart break. The loss of my dear sweet brother. He has sent me a sign as I lay down to sleep just only last night.. There is an after Im not sure what but it is good and peaceful. It will heal our soul from all the hurt we have had. Just believe
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    1990lh commented on As I Lay Sleeping

    10-02-2009

    i do the same thing i'm always thinking aout everything the pass the present the future, it all seem so vast and unknown , even the present i just try to understand everything, haha but i dont think that possible hehe.
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    satch commented on As I Lay Sleeping

    07-02-2009

    A great surmise of our most asked questions, who, what, why, when, where? where we're headed Nice dream good job with thge words,
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