The Lil’ House on Lone Star Road

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I dedicate this poem to my Mom "Vermell" and Dad "Alexander" who did a good job of raising twelve kids in a three bedroom house that never got crowded.  Make me wish I was a kid again--holding back the tears, growing up on LONE STAR ROAD

The Lil’ House on Lone Star Road

I was the new kid on the block as the lil house took on another load

Twelve kids in all growin' up on Lone Star Road

We had all other families beat and we all were kept neat

Our parent always managed to keep shoes on our feet

This was back in the day when it was simpler times

When you only heard about white collar crimes

Other than that, it was all good in the hood

The area we lived in used to be called The Woods

We lived in a three bedroom house with one washer to take on the loads

But we still managed to live in the house dad built on Lone Star Road

As I remembered, six of twelve were out in the world

Still my brother and I had to share a room with girls

It was all good though, I don’t remember bein' poor

We all slept in beds, so there was no sleepin' on the floor

I think my parents didn’t buy a T.V. as you can see

They entertained themselves when they multiplied four kids by three

The money wasn’t all that good but my parents kept the flow

Our food bank never ever got low

Dad was a truck driver, deliverin' big loads

Sometimes he made deliveries to Lone Star Road

I remember mom takin' in the white folks clothes

The one washer we had stayed on overload

Back on a street called Lone Star Road

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WordManipulator commented on The Lil’ House on Lone Star Road

09-21-2009

Good read seven. Don't you still have that house you grew up in?. My parent moved us around so much I don't know where my childhood home is. Well thats the life of an military brat.

Paolo commented on The Lil’ House on Lone Star Road

09-16-2009

We who are privileged may never know how it feels to be wanting and here the voice points out that, "I don't remember being poor," when certainly from my privileged point of reference the voice in this work is poor. Many writers of poetry like this have come across blaming others, white folks, for their sorrows, we do not get that here. Instead we are invited to get a small glimpse into the life of a family rich in many other ways. While money helps make somethings easier, we do not get the sense that the voice laments in not having money but more showing us that a way was made on many fronts to live with dignity. I get the sense that this poem is the start of a great short story or novel about Lone Star Road. I know I want to know more, but I need to be invited as to intrude would be the worse kind of offense. Sometimes you have to make peace that this is all that is willing to be shared. I would read this again and again.

SEVEN

09/16/2009

You must have read my mind or between the lines here...I do have thoughts or writin a novel about my childhood days on this title

Hypothicus commented on The Lil’ House on Lone Star Road

09-10-2009

I like the theme of your poem. It doesn't seem to stray far away from its central topic. You really painted a picture for me. Keep it up.

SEVEN

09/16/2009

THANX

1990lh commented on The Lil’ House on Lone Star Road

09-10-2009

this was really nice seven i truely enjoyed sound like such fond memorie. i really love it i will give u a 10.:0)

SEVEN

09/16/2009

Thanx my lil booger-head sis...hehe

SmileyAngel138 commented on The Lil’ House on Lone Star Road

09-09-2009

this is a nice one about childhood memories...we can't forget our roots...good job :-)

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