Lil' Miss Suzie May

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    RIPPED FROM THE PAGES OF MY JOURNAL: this is a true story about a young girl who lost her innocense. only the name was changed

    Lil' Miss Suzie May

    She said she was twenty-one

    And lookin’ for some fun

    Her name was lil’ Miss Suzie May

    She hoped to party forever and a day

    Lil Miss Suzie May was only six-teen

    Le’me tell you her story, le’me paint you a scene

    She leave the house in her school gurl clothes

    But somewhere down the road she changes into her fish-net, black panty hose

    She turns left before enterin’ the school

    Next block over were yard full of drop-out fools

    House party in the middle of the day

    The owner of the house didn’t care he looked the other way

    Booze, drugs and kids of all ages

    Their addictions reach all stages

    Weed-heads, Meth-heads and teen hoes

    This is how lil' Miss Suzie May story goes

    Now the school day is over and lil’ Miss Suzie May is strung out

    She leaves the party house with her innocent hangin’ out

    They grabbed her and took advantage

    Her virginity she tried to keep but couldn’t manage

    Repeatedly the strungout boys rolled away

    Lil’ Miss Suzie got her wish

    The remembrance of this party gone lasts forever and a day

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    WordManipulator commented on Lil' Miss Suzie May

    08-26-2010

    Well you pretty much said it all here. There is a lot of Lil Miss Suzie May running around these days. I let my lil niece read this one and she just rolled her eyes at me. I think she's on that fast track too but not if I can help it. I hope you got more like this one. keep up the good writes buddy
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    koolmom0 commented on Lil' Miss Suzie May

    08-23-2010

    Seven what a great story to pass along to our teens, maybe if they read this they will think twice before making those wrong choices. I have a poem posted titled Paint The Town, please feel free to read that my friend. :) Kool
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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