O The Quandary

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This is dedicated to a SmileyAngel138

O The Quandary

There’s an angel in my computer, when I see her I’m filled with such glee

I realize it’s a SmileyAngel lQQk’n back at me

Her profile pic says she’s cute

When we chat in the PMs I almost become mute

She neva has a harsh word to say

Sometimes I wished she would neva go away

After our convo, she leave me think’n bout her all the day

If my gurlfriend finds out, I’m history

Or will she turn into another Lorraine Bobbitt, and perform a vasectomy?

I love my gurlfriend, so think’n bout another female wouldn’t be right

So at bedtime I pray a quick prayer that I wouldn’t talk in my sleep at night

If I do, this could get real hairy

 

O The Quandary

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Tempestlady commented on O The Quandary

10-14-2009

What to do, what to do? Fantasy is healthy, but can angels come to you in your sleep? Hmmm lighthearted poetry, fun and real. Write on....

pinklips commented on O The Quandary

10-01-2009

Excellent poem; funny matching your personality. I enjoyed the flow of this piece. Well done.

Tempy commented on O The Quandary

09-25-2009

thats funny. most people who talk in there sleep mumble too much for it to be of concern. truly funny :P

SEVEN

09/25/2009

Maybe in some cases...I've been told I sing better in my sleep...lol

CasimirJash commented on O The Quandary

09-23-2009

lol that's the reason why we all have our on mind and thoughts no one can hear, so you can keep them to yourself lol but atleast you're thinking about your girlfriend and not wanting to break her heart. aww lol great poem

SmileyAngel138 commented on O The Quandary

09-23-2009

oh seven seven seven...I actually liked this poem, its sweet to think someone out there is thinking about you, but I like the fact you have your gf in mind...as you should ALWAYS...great one :-)

SEVEN

09/24/2009

Ew, did u say it was sweet? but thanx anyway..lol

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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