O The Quandary

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    This is dedicated to a SmileyAngel138

    O The Quandary

    There’s an angel in my computer, when I see her I’m filled with such glee

    I realize it’s a SmileyAngel lQQk’n back at me

    Her profile pic says she’s cute

    When we chat in the PMs I almost become mute

    She neva has a harsh word to say

    Sometimes I wished she would neva go away

    After our convo, she leave me think’n bout her all the day

    If my gurlfriend finds out, I’m history

    Or will she turn into another Lorraine Bobbitt, and perform a vasectomy?

    I love my gurlfriend, so think’n bout another female wouldn’t be right

    So at bedtime I pray a quick prayer that I wouldn’t talk in my sleep at night

    If I do, this could get real hairy

     

    O The Quandary

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    Tempestlady commented on O The Quandary

    10-14-2009

    What to do, what to do? Fantasy is healthy, but can angels come to you in your sleep? Hmmm lighthearted poetry, fun and real. Write on....
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    pinklips commented on O The Quandary

    10-01-2009

    Excellent poem; funny matching your personality. I enjoyed the flow of this piece. Well done.
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    Tempy commented on O The Quandary

    09-25-2009

    thats funny. most people who talk in there sleep mumble too much for it to be of concern. truly funny :P
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    SEVEN

    09/25/2009

    Maybe in some cases...I've been told I sing better in my sleep...lol

    CasimirJash commented on O The Quandary

    09-23-2009

    lol that's the reason why we all have our on mind and thoughts no one can hear, so you can keep them to yourself lol but atleast you're thinking about your girlfriend and not wanting to break her heart. aww lol great poem
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    SmileyAngel138 commented on O The Quandary

    09-23-2009

    oh seven seven seven...I actually liked this poem, its sweet to think someone out there is thinking about you, but I like the fact you have your gf in mind...as you should ALWAYS...great one :-)
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    SEVEN

    09/24/2009

    Ew, did u say it was sweet? but thanx anyway..lol

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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