DON'T LET GO

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    This lil poem is what keeps me goin'....RIPPED FROM THE PAGES OF MY JOURNAL

    DON'T LET GO

    Don’t let go

    Hang on to your dreams

    don’t let go

    Life is full of twists and turns

    don’t let go

    As you walk life’s path there will be a lot to learn

    don’t let go

    Success may seem far away

    don’t let go

    Failure is waiting

    So don’t let go

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    Paolo commented on DON'T LET GO

    10-11-2010

    We are admonished to not let go, no matter that to have our dreams we have so many other things, here we see, twists and turns that may defeat us, but the voice continues that despite every achieving success that road will not be easy to traverse but we are also reminded to not let go that the true failing is letting loose your grasp on the dream. The title makes this poem work, we are reminded that for a dream to work and be realised we must keep at it.

    WordManipulator commented on DON'T LET GO

    08-26-2010

    That is so like you 7. you keep people hopes up. You are a true friend indeed

    Rhymer commented on DON'T LET GO

    08-19-2010

    Inspirational in a way, never let go on finding success even though a lot of failures comes our way.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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