THE DAWN IS CALLIN'

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    Ya gotta love those wee hours of the mornin'

    THE DAWN IS CALLIN'
    Its late; Midnight
    Darkness was upon the land
    The moon cast still shadows upon the filtered sand
    The air was peaceful, silent was abound
    Not one human was stirrin'; No, not one was found
    Great time and I choose to be alone
    Cut off from civilization? well at least from my unplugged phone
    Here I lay collectin' my thoughts
    Hoping that the world hasn't come to a screechin' halt
    As time moves on; darkness fallin'
    Pardon my French;  Damn!
    Dawn is callin'.

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    inkmaster commented on THE DAWN IS CALLIN'

    12-01-2009

    Nice it rolls great i liked it..................................................inkmaster
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    WordManipulator commented on THE DAWN IS CALLIN'

    09-27-2009

    Very nice seven. I'm putting this one on my favorite list to read again. Keep up the good work I know you got more
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    Hypothicus commented on THE DAWN IS CALLIN'

    09-10-2009

    Ha! Very uplifting poem. You started out dark and solemn but brought up my spirits in the end. That is a wonderful quality in a poem. This one is definitely a 10!
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    ladydraeko commented on THE DAWN IS CALLIN'

    06-06-2009

    Oh yes, I can totally relate to this poem. TY for sharing this with me, your flow is great I like the way you wrote this the style works for these words. It sounds like me totally. Did you read my mind when you wrote this one??? or are we similar and love the night time when no one is around to bother us? HUGS!!!!!!!!
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    SEVEN

    06/06/2009

    thank you...i may have stole a line or two from u...lol

    Kelstorm commented on THE DAWN IS CALLIN'

    04-27-2009

    I liked it. This style of poetry by others doesn't always have the elements of a good poem. Your's does
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    SEVEN

    06/10/2009

    Thank you

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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