"SEVEN"

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    RIPPED FROM THE PAGES OF MY JOURNAL

    "SEVEN"

    On May seven I came to be

    On the seventh day God rested and then created me

    When God made me he was just showin’ off

    A perfect specimen of a man, nothin’ about me is soft

    Before I was formed I was told

    “You will be a well bred man before you get old”

    To this day I hold my head up high

    Even though life hands me a lemon at times; I'll never sigh

    I’d add water and sugar and make some lemon-aid

    Back then I had my own stand and got paid

    There is an angel missin’ in Heaven

    He came to Earth and named himself "Seven"

    B. Alan "Seven" Williams--Aug 2010

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    1990lh commented on "SEVEN"

    10-14-2010

    lmao ( hahahaah.ect.) i bet your head is bigger than the red queen in alice in wonderland. " There is an angel missin’ in Heaven He came to Earth and named himself "Seven" hahaha super funny arrogant or not your words are still the sh*t. hah. hugs
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    SEVEN

    10/25/2010

    Hahaha....Thanx my lil booger-head sis

    1990lh

    01/14/2013

    LMAO..This is really some funny shit hahaha....I had to read this again. hahaha

    WordManipulator commented on "SEVEN"

    08-26-2010

    there you go again, blowing your own horn. dont let your head get too big or cant wear you hat anymore, hehe. nice write 7
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    SEVEN

    10/25/2010

    I'll try not to let it out grow yours.....hehe

    oleans commented on "SEVEN"

    08-17-2010

    WHAT A WONDERFUL POME I AM INPRESS I THINK U R GOOD THANKX OLEANS
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    SEVEN

    08/18/2010

    Thanx for the commy....I can only get better

    Teardrops commented on "SEVEN"

    08-17-2010

    I like the poem and if we can blow our own horn then who will . Great write my friend Marie
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    SEVEN

    08/18/2010

    Well only I can blow this horn to the right tune,,,,wink,....thanx for the commy

    girlygirl1234 commented on "SEVEN"

    08-17-2010

    wow seven this is a truly amazing piece. i think this might be the first time i read any of your poems. and i like it
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    SEVEN

    08/18/2010

    Thanx for the commy.....and feel free to browse the rest of my poems

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    SEVEN’s Poems (58)

    Title Comments Submitted
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    OMG! ---YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE TRUTH! 10 11/07/2010
    "NO COMMENTS" 8 08/26/2010
    BACK THEN 8 08/19/2010
    Remembering to Pray 4 08/19/2010
    DON'T LET GO 3 08/19/2010
    You're Grown? 4 08/19/2010
    Lil' Miss Suzie May 2 08/19/2010
    Just "STELLAAAA!" 4 08/18/2010
    "SEVEN" 6 08/17/2010
    FIRST FLIGHT 9 08/12/2010
    Almost Jailbait 14 06/08/2010
    The Tragedy of White Injustice---p
    t3    		 1 12/19/2009
    The Tragedy of White Injustice---p
    t2    		 2 12/19/2009
    The Tragedy of White Injustice---p
    t1    		 3 12/19/2009
    When....Dang It 14 11/30/2009
    Tagged and Labeled 11 11/24/2009
    Payback is a Mutha 10 12/15/2009
    Better Off.....Left Alone 3 12/09/2009
    Simple and Plain 8 12/15/2009
    Jus’ A Pawn 9 12/01/2009
    Saggy Bottom Boys 8 12/15/2009
    Dear Dr. Journal 4 12/01/2009
    America’s Fabrication 2 10/19/2009
    O The Quandary 5 12/15/2009
    To whom it may concern: 3 12/01/2009
    Banned, WTF(What The Freak?) 11 11/19/2009
    Strada sola della stella 1 12/01/2009
    Old Gurl 3 12/01/2009
    Deja-Vu 1 12/01/2009
    KEN 1 09/16/2009
    Short, Simple and Sweet 1 09/16/2009
    Pray and Pray Again 1 12/01/2009
    Recession Confession? 5 10/09/2009
    My short bio poem 5 09/10/2009
    The Lil’ House on Lone Star Road 9 12/01/2009
    LIKE MIKE 9 09/14/2009
    Baby Gurl---pt 3 11 08/07/2009
    Baby Gurl---The saga continues 5 07/18/2009
    Baby Gurl 9 07/02/2009
    The Mind of a Sex Fiend 11 07/02/2009
    My First 5 12/09/2009
    Wet Dream 6 06/24/2009
    Ms. So-N-So: "Teacher's Pet" 10 12/09/2009
    Brown Suga 10 10/08/2009
    Hopelessness 13 12/09/2009
    The Two Rainbows 8 10/09/2009
    My Ho 3 10/15/2009
    Lying Azz "B" 9 11/16/2009
    Look What America Has Done For Me 2 11/20/2009
    As I Lay Sleeping 4 06/14/2009
    So We Can Meet A'gin 2 10/07/2009
    TOO BLACK, TOO STRONG 9 09/22/2009
    Let Me Not Forget To Pray 6 09/25/2009
    THE DAWN IS CALLIN' 7 12/09/2009
    This is who I am, This is who I be---- 9 02/23/2009
    I CAN'T LOVE YOU LIKE I USED TOO 9 06/02/2009
    Portrait of a Gang Banga 26 12/15/2009
    Let Me Not Forget To Pray 26 12/15/2009
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