I CAN'T LOVE YOU LIKE I USED TOO

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  • Lost Love
    • SEVEN
    • HEYLO, I'M BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!!!

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    I CAN'T LOVE YOU LIKE I USED TOO
    I can't love you like I used too, straight from the heart
    Because when you left me girl, it tore me apart
    I tried to get you back, you just kept on going
    You now realize I loved you without ever really knowing
    Now you're back to make amend
    Well this is where I bid farewell, this is where it end
    I found myself a new love
    She was there when my heart was about to fall
    She gave me her strength, her love; she gave me her all
    She was there when the tears came
    On her I leaned till my strength was regained
    I know grown men don't cry
    But when you lose a love like I did
    Macho subside
    Girl you hurt me far than you can ever believe
    My heart literally stopped beating when it was deceived.

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    VaZFynest commented on I CAN'T LOVE YOU LIKE I USED TOO

    09-16-2010

    lost love @ its finest...bravo.........a man wearing his heart on his sleeve...pricele$$
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    1990lh commented on I CAN'T LOVE YOU LIKE I USED TOO

    10-02-2009

    awwww poor seven want me to kick her as* lamo hhahahahhahaaaaa i said lamo i eman lmao hehehehhe, but anyway, good poem could really feel the emotions in ths one great write
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    satch commented on I CAN'T LOVE YOU LIKE I USED TOO

    07-02-2009

    A sad tale of a broken heart well worded but honest and not revengeful. great job'
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    Indigogreen16 commented on I CAN'T LOVE YOU LIKE I USED TOO

    06-11-2009

    i AGREE WITH ME & Paolo, LOL THIS IS THE BEGINNING OF SOMETHING MRE PASSIONATE, MORE, MORE MORE, bRING IT sEVEN, AND GIVE A Stronger, cleaner finsh...... take this to the lab....Good Job......
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    Paolo commented on I CAN'T LOVE YOU LIKE I USED TOO

    06-02-2009

    I'd love to see this one edited and cleaned up. There is the essence of a good poem here but it hasn't arrived yet.
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    SEVEN

    06/02/2009

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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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