FIRST FLIGHT

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    Ripped from the pages of my journal

    FIRST FLIGHT

     

    I took flight beyond the clouds

    I had no fear of height and I was somewhat proud

    It was my first plane ride into the blue

    So I dared not to look down or I was through

    I felt the plane leave the ground as it slowly rise

    I then tightly closed my eyes

    My heart start’d racin’

    My nerves start’d pacin'

    Before I knew it; fear I was facin’

    I gripped the plane’s seat with a frantic hold

    The nerve of me to have a window seat; now that was bold

    The plane shook as it taxied down the runway

    I sunk into my seat and began to pray

    We were airborne and peacefulness surround

    Then a voice from the cockpit made a sound

    The pilot announced we’re five-thousands feet off the ground

    A passenger next to me commented, first flight?

    I asked, was it obvious? As I gripped the seat with fright

    I finally opened my eyes--the nerve of me

    I peered out the window to witness not a sight of trees

    Lord I was in the mist of your heavenly clouds

    The noise of my beatin' heart was somewhat loud

    Then I saw my life flash before me

    I yawned; it was over on the count of three

    Well If this plane crash at least I seen how my life been

    Now I had another reason to pray again

    Before I knew it we were about to land

    Lord when we touched ground I got down and kissed the sand

    My first flight was over and I was glad

    To see it end I was almost sad---Not

    Will I fly again? only God can tell

    Maybe when frosty the snowman make it through hell

    Don’t call me a chicken because I don’t wanna fly around

    That’s not what I fear, it’s the crashin' on the way down

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    WordManipulator commented on FIRST FLIGHT

    08-26-2010

    Aw man I know how you felt, I had that same feeling when I first flew. I'll never forget it. I damn near threw up. or maybe because altitude and alcohol dont mix.....hehe....

    SEVEN

    10/25/2010

    Word'''....U dip.....hehe.......thanx

    shywoodrose commented on FIRST FLIGHT

    08-17-2010

    interesting! I love experience.............................

    SEVEN

    08/18/2010

    Thanx

    Lillixfan14 commented on FIRST FLIGHT

    08-17-2010

    amazing seven! you did absolutly wonderful! i rate a 10 on this

    SEVEN

    10/25/2010

    Thanx....Lill

    Teardrops commented on FIRST FLIGHT

    08-16-2010

    i love this and used to say the right bothers were flying some of the planes i was on . Great write and stay on the ground if you can Marie

    SEVEN

    10/25/2010

    Thanx .... Teardrops

    Artie commented on FIRST FLIGHT

    08-16-2010

    I love the humor in this. I've been on quite a few flights, and it seems like everytime there's someone like this nearby. Great write - 10 from me

    SEVEN

    08/16/2010

    Thanx Artie......I think i got the fear of flyin' bug outta me......we will see if'n I take another flight...

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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