BACK THEN

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I dedicate this piece to Pamela and all the gIrls who didn't give me the time of day, "BACK THEN".... RIPPED FROM THE PAGES OF MY JOURNAL

BACK THEN

Back Then,
you didn’t want me

Now yo ass is callin’ on me

Back Then,
when I was down on my luck

You didn’t give me a chance,
        you didn’t give a f**k

Back Then,
you didn’t even wanna know me

Now that I got the ends you wanna bl*w me

Back Then,
when I didn’t have two nickels to rub

All I was to you was a scrub

Now that I’m sailin’ the seas on high

Now you show up lookin’ for a ride

Sorry girlfriend but I have set sail

There’s a sign on my back that reads:

“No ridin’ my coat tail”

Back Then,
all you did was call me out my name

You fed me your ass and play’d me a game

Now I made it, but still I walk the same

Broke ass black boy; You remember callin’ me those names?

To this day I know you must feel ashamed

Or you wouldn’t be tryin’ to get into my game

To this day I’m not even mad at you

Because;
Back Then,
my troubles wasn’t gone last always, this I knew

Your girlfriends tellin’ me how you wanna get with me now

Sorry to tell ya trick, but no way, no how

When you read this, I hope you understand

One thing in life I don’t do is, I don’t take second hand

If you remembered me from way back when

You should’ve got with my ass...

Back Then

August 2010

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1990lh commented on BACK THEN

10-14-2010

lol, you tella, good write seven love the vibe in this one

SEVEN

10/25/2010

Thanx my booger-head lil' sis

Crush commented on BACK THEN

09-27-2010

well done, i would love to herar this in a rap song, in the middle of a rhianna or lil kim joint. perfect ! very nice !

VaZFynest commented on BACK THEN

09-16-2010

I know ole' girl sick right now....I feel ya! Dueces! SHoulda,woulda coulda ...........

simoneaugustus commented on BACK THEN

09-01-2010

Nice write! I call those people 'spinners' because they're always turning around trying to find the next step up. Well done!

WordManipulator commented on BACK THEN

08-26-2010

I have to agree with you 7. Its just like women to get on after you reached the high road in life. Back Then when you had nothing they didnt want anything to do with you. so feel you on this. tell it like it is

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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Title Comments
Title Comments
OMG! ---YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE TRUTH! 10
"NO COMMENTS" 8
BACK THEN 8
Remembering to Pray 4
DON'T LET GO 3
You're Grown? 4
Lil' Miss Suzie May 2
Just "STELLAAAA!" 4
"SEVEN" 6
FIRST FLIGHT 9
Almost Jailbait 14
The Tragedy of White Injustice---p
t3
1
The Tragedy of White Injustice---p
t2
2
The Tragedy of White Injustice---p
t1
3
When....Dang It 14
Tagged and Labeled 11
Payback is a Mutha 10
Better Off.....Left Alone 3
Simple and Plain 8
Jus’ A Pawn 9
Saggy Bottom Boys 8
Dear Dr. Journal 4
America’s Fabrication 2
O The Quandary 5
To whom it may concern: 3
Banned, WTF(What The Freak?) 11
Strada sola della stella 1
Old Gurl 3
Deja-Vu 1
KEN 1
Short, Simple and Sweet 1
Pray and Pray Again 1
Recession Confession? 5
My short bio poem 5
The Lil’ House on Lone Star Road 9
LIKE MIKE 9
Baby Gurl---pt 3 11
Baby Gurl---The saga continues 5
Baby Gurl 9
The Mind of a Sex Fiend 11
My First 5
Wet Dream 6
Ms. So-N-So: "Teacher's Pet" 10
Brown Suga 10
Hopelessness 13
The Two Rainbows 8
My Ho 3
Lying Azz "B" 9
Look What America Has Done For Me 2
As I Lay Sleeping 4
So We Can Meet A'gin 2
TOO BLACK, TOO STRONG 9
Let Me Not Forget To Pray 6
THE DAWN IS CALLIN' 7
This is who I am, This is who I be---- 9
I CAN'T LOVE YOU LIKE I USED TOO 9
Portrait of a Gang Banga 26
Let Me Not Forget To Pray 26