Baby Gurl---The saga continues

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    Baby Gurl---The saga continues

    Hello, this is Baby gurl

    I finally found the time to call you

    I wanted to see what you're up to

    If you’re serious bout takin me out

    I’m ready to see what you’re all about

    Just to let u know; I’m not a materialistic gurl

    So there’s no need for you to impress me with diamonds and pearls

    I just got out of a bad relationship; my ex-boyfriend was a jerk

    I gave him my all but he didn’t put in the work

    My feelings for him grew bland

    So I packed his bags and told him I may have found myself a real man

    So brotha I hope you be true

    Cuz I wanna start a new relationship with you

    When we talked the other day

    All I could do was think about you when you walked away

    The lil voice inside me told me I may have a winner

    So if you’re up to it, I’m ready to go out to dinner

    Here’s my street address

    No need to dress up, cuz I won’t be impressed

    Just be yourself and true to me

    And I will give all of myself to you;

    Maybe---

    We’ll see.

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    WordManipulator commented on Baby Gurl---The saga continues

    10-09-2009

    The saga continues huh. Nice work again Seven. The rythem and rhymes flows well even as you conversate. You got the gift my friend and I know you got more to come. Keep them coming dude.
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    1990lh commented on Baby Gurl---The saga continues

    10-02-2009

    hahaha yeah right butthead u know she turn u down lmao hahahahahahah wow i really thing i'm funny. lol but anyway good write again butthead.
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    Paolo commented on Baby Gurl---The saga continues

    08-02-2009

    I imagined when I was reading this that my phone was to my ear listening to this message the author is sharing with me. I did not struggle with listening and thinking about how to advise my friend; it was to me like someone was leaving me the message. That is what writing authentically is all about, making it feel real to the reader. That takes craftsmanship other poets would do well to develop. It is a fine end to the saga, but don't you wish you got to know more about these two? Though the best writers often leave us to wonder. Thanks for a great work.
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    GucciGurl commented on Baby Gurl---The saga continues

    07-20-2009

    Hey seven this really happened to me. But guess wat he turned out to be a jerk to! But I love your work
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