You're Grown?

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    This is dedicated to all the youngons out there who think they'fe grown...RIPPED FROM THE PAGES OF MY JOURNAL

    You're Grown?

    These youngons today have got it made

    Yet they wanna act grown and misbehave

    Listen up adolescents and let it be known

    Your mouth may talk a mile a minute but your ass still not grown

    All that dissin’ the older folk is so immature

    Watch how you mouth catch somethin’ your ass can’t cure

    Ok you wanna be grown?

    Move out own your own

    And don’t call mama and daddy to front you a loan

    Only six-teen years old and you think you know it all

    When your ass hit the pavement your innocense is first to fall

    And when your luck finally runs out and it will

    Because it haven’t been a month and you already behind in bills

    And when you get into a bind and sh*t outta luck

    Just remember those famous last words you said to your parents “You don’t give a f*ck”

    Now the car they bought you is needin’ gas

    The rent and lights need to be paid

    But you’re at a party shakin’ that ass

    With every horndog that’s lookin’ to get laid

    Case you don’t know le’me paint you a scene

    One night of pleasure; nine mouths of pain,

    Three days in the hospital; with one baby to name

    Oh but you’re not even seven-teen yet

    Do you know who the daddy is? I’m willin’ to bet

    Its not the joker that made your toes curl

    It’s the one that makes you hurl

    You know the one you wouldn’t have givin’ the time of day

    Well you didn’t give him the time but you gave him that pu-say

    Now all the boys actin’ like they’re not the one

    So they all feed you what Michael Jackson sung

    “Billy-jean is not my lover, she’s just a girl that says I am the one”,

    “That kid is not my son”

    Now what the freak you gone do?

    Remember you burned the bridge that lead to home

    Ooops, eviction notice, there goes the dome

    Homeless shelter delayin’ to take you in

    Daym, now you feel like you just can’t win

    They know your life story and how you been livin’

    You’re grown?

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    VaZFynest commented on You're Grown?

    09-16-2010

    ALot of yungn's need to read this.....PREACH! thay ain't GROWN!!!!!!!

    MsKrystle commented on You're Grown?

    09-05-2010

    All these fast tail lil girls need to read this. Thinkin they grown, wearin they panties outside callin it shorts. Nasty! Im grown and i dont even dress like that. Its sad. Some lil girls just dont get enough attention at home

    WordManipulator commented on You're Grown?

    08-26-2010

    You did it again 7. My niece starting to dislike you, hehe. Well you didnt say nothing wrong so obvioustly the truth must hurt. Keep it coming and I will make sure she reads them. She's 12 years old and sometimes she thinks shes 30.

    RettaJ commented on You're Grown?

    08-23-2010

    oh snap! tell 'em, that is what's up...go 'head wit' yo' bad self

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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