My First

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    Ripped from the pages of my journal: Childhood

    My First

    Boner   Jack   Woody?

    I was young; Only ten years old
    Thoughts of naked women in my mind I hold
    I'm at that age where puberty weighs in and innocent ends
    I would get hard at those slightest winds
    Curiousity took hold as I bathes in my tub alone
    I then started touching and playing with my bone
    I grabbed hold and slightly squeeze
    The soapy water had me stroking with ease
    The feeling inside me suddenly changed
    It felt good and somewhat strange
    So I continued to stroke my now hard dick
    The head was throbbing and the vains were thick
    I then thought of my mom walking in so I had to do this quick
    The feeling inside felt like I was about explode
    It all came gushing out as I shot off my first load
    My body trembled; splashing water everywhere
    Until I finish shooting my load, I really didn't care
    All I could say; it felt somewhat goody
    A boy in a tub playing with his woody

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    Rygar commented on My First

    11-23-2009

    haha, nice! made me think of my first one too... nice job
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    WordManipulator commented on My First

    09-27-2009

    I know that feeling, my mom found my porn magazines under my mattress. she dam near fainted. hehe. I was mad when she threw them out because I wasn't done with miss June yet if you know what I mean. This poem sure took me back to my boyhood days. I still remember my first time. nice work seven
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    LadyLuck commented on My First

    06-30-2009

    HA!thats precious.... i think it was kinda cute. little boy unknowingly stumbles across sex kinda weird reading an erotica about a little boy finding his sex but kinda cute too gotta hurry so mom don see
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    MsKrystle commented on My First

    06-25-2009

    Its sexy in a innocent virgin type way. I like it. Not what I was expecting from the title but it was still good.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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