Jus’ A Pawn

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    Ripped from the pages of my journal....The aftermath of "Lyin' Azz B"

    Jus’ A Pawn

    I got so much hate for you; I’m at wit’s end

    Every time I see you, my middle finger extends

    All I ever wanted to do was love you girl

    You done hardened my heart, now all I want to do is hurl---Bullets

    I got so much hate for you its stress’s me out

    If I could get away with murder, your brain would be hang’n out---BANG

    You did me so wrong it’s a cryin' shame

    But I was blinded by love I couldn’t see that I was Jus’ A Pawn in your game

    Probed by the Feds

    Docs got me on meds

    They got their ears paused to listen

    Jus’ in case you came up missin'

    People think I’m schiz

    When you’re the one that’s full of shit

    But I’m gone get a grip

    And shut my lips

    Cuz I don’t want to flip

    Over a piece of shit like you

    So here’s what I’m gone do

    I'm gone let my pen flow

    Let your tired ass go

    So I can get back to being calm, cool and collect’d

    All this hate I got for you has been correct’d

    I’m gone put away the verbal gun

    In honor of my son

    This madness? I put a fork in it…..It is done

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    VaZFynest commented on Jus’ A Pawn

    11-01-2010

    This is your closure I presume...or close.....great prose....once again...great read!!! Should I do a pt to to Sorry? or another.....fill me in with your input...peace my fellow poet!!!! I felt the sting of your betrayal.............great you are lettin" go.....through ink!
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    WordManipulator commented on Jus’ A Pawn

    10-15-2009

    Wow seven, I know the feeling your going through here. I just got divorced as you know and she was a total be-otch. You know what I'm saying?. I totally love this. I want to send my ex a copy. I hope she gets the message. I'm putting this on my favorite list to read again and again. Good work seven
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    fmrdancer commented on Jus’ A Pawn

    10-06-2009

    WOW!! Very powerful The hate and the lost love are almost palatable. A dark, but beautifully written poem.
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    Venom637 commented on Jus’ A Pawn

    10-01-2009

    I like that. The way you just put the words together to paint the picture. Really brings the reader into the poem.
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    2good4u commented on Jus’ A Pawn

    09-30-2009

    Excellent job 7 very impressive. I liked it alot. Sorry you were hurt. Trust in rouges comments however. He is pure genius really. I enjoyed this piece, and your ghetto style.
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