Saggy Bottom Boys

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    This goes out to all my young brothers.....Ripped from the pages of my journal

    Saggy Bottom Boys

    You walk around with your pants half off your ass
    Show’n the world that you have no class
    Makes me wonder what your parents all about
    Let’n you leave the house with your ass hang’n out
    Do they know, do they care?....This I doubt
    If I ever see my boy walk’n ‘round like that
    I’m gone put my Air Jordans where his pants should have been at
    What a disgrace
    To the Negro’ race
    Our forefathers struggled and died so we can be free
    So you can wear your pants down ‘round your knees?
    Ne'gross please!
    Give yourself some dignity and respect
    Come correct
    Put all this ig’nants in check
    And give yourself a chance
    Be a real man---
    PULL UP YOUR DAYM PANTS!

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    Teardrops commented on Saggy Bottom Boys

    07-30-2010

    the poem addresses a point of dress that is not only disrespectful but unbecomming to the person . Your poem hits it on the head . Thanks for the read Marie
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    1990lh commented on Saggy Bottom Boys

    06-17-2010

    like i know right wtf! i mean i dont want no man wearing no tight ass pants to point he cant sit down, but thet have taken sagging to a whole other level. it is ok to have baggy pants. but ewwwwwww they look so stink and nasty when their pants is now to their knees. i man it is stupid everytime some boy with his pants dwon to his knees try to holla at me im like boy plz i wouldnt be seen it he dark with ya. hahhaah. but anyway great jo.
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    stever commented on Saggy Bottom Boys

    11-19-2009

    yea i sooo agree..you know they tell me in prison that means your ready 4 sex..good job on this right ,write
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    EvilTwin commented on Saggy Bottom Boys

    10-13-2009

    I love it!!!! So true. You can hardly find a guy that isn't wearing his pants at his knees. It's disturbing.
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    fmrdancer commented on Saggy Bottom Boys

    10-01-2009

    Yay! I agree totally with your message whether the guy's white or black , This is just tacky and disrespectful. A great read.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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