Baby Gurl---pt 3

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    Baby Gurl---pt 3

    It’s a quarter to six and I’m about to take Baby gurl out on a date

    When I get to her crib I hope I don’t have to wa8

    Well, you know how u women are; you say you’ll be ready but we all know that mean fashionably la8

    Anyways, I got to her crib where the big hand was on 7 and the lil hand on 3

    I knocked on the door and behold, beauty stood before me

    Baby gurl hair style was tight

    Her lil red dress was huggin her just right

    It revealed her shape in the evening light

    So I gave her a hug and didn’t wanna let go

    I made sure she felt my lil woody below

    I escorted her to my ride and we headed down to my fav Italian spot

    As we were cruisin, she put her hand on my leg and shit got hot

    All I could think was, she was either horny or outta her mind

    Cuz there’s plenty room in this Hummer for me to stroke that ghetto ass behind

    Finally we did dinner and errrything couldn’t be finer

    Then I took her back to her place and she wanted a sixty-nine’r

     2b-con’t

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    GucciGurl commented on Baby Gurl---pt 3

    12-21-2009

    Seven you always amaze me. The little woody cracked me up. I would have expected you to say more. I love to read your writtings like this.
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    WordManipulator commented on Baby Gurl---pt 3

    10-09-2009

    Hahaha. Good one Seven. I'm still laughing about the lil woody part. hehe. and the ghetto behind. This is too funny. and yet again you made it flow. I can't wait to read what happens next. I know it will be a good one.
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    1990lh commented on Baby Gurl---pt 3

    10-02-2009

    lmao this is funny but for real great poem al three of them it was a cool story hahaha, and rea funny but that my butthead bro lol. by the wat did i say that ur a butthead. lol
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    photochick commented on Baby Gurl---pt 3

    08-13-2009

    lol great poem i enjoyed this all the way from the first line to the last nice flow seven perfect imagery way to set the scene for all your readers perfect in every way
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    bitchywitch commented on Baby Gurl---pt 3

    08-07-2009

    You is sucha HO! Made me hot just readin it..A man w/ a woody AND a Hummer.Very sexy...(2b-cont)
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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