Brown Suga

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    This goes out to all the brown suga delights....You know who you are.

    Brown Suga

    Brown Suga
    You're so fine
    I wish I could make you mine
    Your brown skin so evenly toned
    Your hair so beautifully combed


    Brown Suga
    You're so fine
    What can I say to make you mine?
    Write you poetry each and everyday?
    Or show you my love in a verbal way?


    Brown Suga
    You're so fine
    What can I do to make you mine?
    Paint a portrait of you, as you beautifully pose?
    Send you flowers or one single rose?

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    Teardrops commented on Brown Suga

    08-01-2010

    the single rose does it every time . Great write and the flow was wonderful Marie
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    1990lh commented on Brown Suga

    10-02-2009

    hahaha nice seven i mean butthead hehe. my butthead bro got game hehe lmao.
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    litldeer commented on Brown Suga

    06-10-2009

    This is my first time reading your work and I truly enjoyed this. You have a way of making a sister feel like a beautiful woman. I hope the woman you wrote this for appreciated it. Good use of words and perfect rhyming. Great job. This get's a 10.
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    SEVEN

    06/10/2009

    In all flavor...wink Thanks

    LadiTrouble22 commented on Brown Suga

    06-10-2009

    I REALLY ENJOYED EVERY MIN OF READIN THIS POEM I WONDER UMMMMM........... WHO WAS U TALKIN BOUT AT THE TIME LOLZ....
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    SEVEN

    06/10/2009

    It might be u.... wink...thanks

    passionsdance commented on Brown Suga

    06-08-2009

    I like this alot . Reminds me of great work in books like Listen Up by Zoe Anglesay . Good job , I could invision this whole piece. A man with a sweaty tank on sniffin the skin of a black queen offerin her the world for one single taste . Beautiful .
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    SEVEN

    06/09/2009

    Thanks...

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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