Brown Suga

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    This goes out to all the brown suga delights....You know who you are.

    Brown Suga

    Brown Suga
    You're so fine
    I wish I could make you mine
    Your brown skin so evenly toned
    Your hair so beautifully combed


    Brown Suga
    You're so fine
    What can I say to make you mine?
    Write you poetry each and everyday?
    Or show you my love in a verbal way?


    Brown Suga
    You're so fine
    What can I do to make you mine?
    Paint a portrait of you, as you beautifully pose?
    Send you flowers or one single rose?

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    Teardrops commented on Brown Suga

    08-01-2010

    the single rose does it every time . Great write and the flow was wonderful Marie
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    1990lh commented on Brown Suga

    10-02-2009

    hahaha nice seven i mean butthead hehe. my butthead bro got game hehe lmao.
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    litldeer commented on Brown Suga

    06-10-2009

    This is my first time reading your work and I truly enjoyed this. You have a way of making a sister feel like a beautiful woman. I hope the woman you wrote this for appreciated it. Good use of words and perfect rhyming. Great job. This get's a 10.
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    SEVEN

    06/10/2009

    In all flavor...wink Thanks

    LadiTrouble22 commented on Brown Suga

    06-10-2009

    I REALLY ENJOYED EVERY MIN OF READIN THIS POEM I WONDER UMMMMM........... WHO WAS U TALKIN BOUT AT THE TIME LOLZ....
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    SEVEN

    06/10/2009

    It might be u.... wink...thanks

    passionsdance commented on Brown Suga

    06-08-2009

    I like this alot . Reminds me of great work in books like Listen Up by Zoe Anglesay . Good job , I could invision this whole piece. A man with a sweaty tank on sniffin the skin of a black queen offerin her the world for one single taste . Beautiful .
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    SEVEN

    06/09/2009

    Thanks...

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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