Dear Dr. Journal

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Ripped from the pages of my journal.  Yeah I keep a journal....If Captain Kirk can keep a log then I more surely can keep a journal....thank you

Dear Dr. Journal

This is the beginin’ of somethin’ I know will end

My journal? My journey? I don’t know which or when

 I've come a long ways and yet have a ways to go

Where I end up only God knows

So I began writin’ to let my pen flow

As I move onward my writing began to grow

Dear Dr. Journal;

               Daym another entry?

And I’m still in the same century?

Well n-e-ways I got pulled over today and was given three citations

I prayed a quick prayer that they wouldn’t haul me off to the poepoe station

Failure to yield to a eight-sided sign

Daym an eighty-one dollar fine

Buckle up, it’s the law

Caught by “The Man” in blue was a fatal flaw

Added to the bill makes it a total of one-twenty-eight

Don’t forget the third ticket, its for a court date

Silly me couldn’t find my insurance card to prove that I was insured

Now I got thirty days to keep my freedom secured

Off goes the blue lights and I’m homeward bound

Drivin’ home mad from the north side of town

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Crush commented on Dear Dr. Journal

09-27-2010

very entertaining...............................................................good show !

1990lh commented on Dear Dr. Journal

06-17-2010

hahahah....ha-haha-ha-ha you got a ticket hahahaha points finger and laughs hehehe. ugh i dont drive ( well good anyway) i finnally got somebody to teach me hahaha. but ugh i would be super pissed if i got a ticket ugh i cant stand the police oh what a great day it would be if i could just punch one or all of em in the face haaha.

sammia commented on Dear Dr. Journal

01-29-2010

Seven I like this it seems like something everyone would go through. I wouldn't know since I don't drive. Although I do know that getting tickets are a bitch..Great write, Keep writing and sharing.

WordManipulator commented on Dear Dr. Journal

09-27-2009

Hahaha.....Getting tickets is a bitch...I should know I got a few myself...I should have put my anger down on paper like you instead of getting mad...You know I kinda like reading your work seven you put everyday life in poetry...Nice job

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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