My story

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My story

They say every person has a story at least that's what's always been told to me. As I lay here in this cast I realize that my pain did not come free. My story contains passion my story contains love my story contains a faith in the heavens above. My story contains anger my story contains rage. My lifes story contains many experiences some believe I should keep locked up like an Animal in a cage. My story has happy my story has sad. My story even has triumph when things were looking bad. My story has pain my story has failure. It even has some instances which contain mailure (not a word I know just trying to keep the flow going) my story contains happy my story contains sad. As I sit here in the dark I can honestly say this is my story and I am so glad. They say that everyone has a story to tell. I wonder if your story will end so well

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PoetWithCancer commented on My story

12-26-2010

Good rhythms and well-placed rhymes that work, in this poem. A good listing of the various kinds of life experience in your story. Your story hasn't ended yet; I hope it has a good ending. 10 from me. --Michael LP, Mr. Poet

redbloodink commented on My story

04-03-2010

you know Super.... this was just super.... fantastic.... and I just like you my friend.... red

earthly commented on My story

03-26-2010

We keep writing and rewriting our stories-every moment is a new chance-Namaste...Earthly

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