They Told Me So


They Told Me So

They told me that i was way too good for you
Every time i would look into your eyes i would find it untrue
They asked me to forget about you and begged me to move on
I felt a complacancy and a reason to keep going and in fact stay strong
People said you would be no good and that i would have to take care of you for life
All i ever wanted to hear or could hear out of their mouths was that you would make a great wife
They told me that you would eventually break my heart in two
Although, in every one of my moments i thought of noone but you
You never understood exactly why i loved you so much
I felt an electricity from every hand hold and every touch
They told you that you were too good for me
Every time you looked into my eyes you would indeed see
They asked you to forget me and begged you to move on
You felt a reason to stop moving and to stop staying strong
People told you i was no good and you would have to take care of me for life
All you ever wanted to hear was how terrible i was out of their mouths and that you would make someone elses great wife
They told you I would eventually break your heart in two
I never understood exactly what feelings were false or true
I never understood why you loved me so much
And yet every time we were out you would talk about other men with whom they had a crush
You told me I was too pushy you told me to move on
You left me in a time i needed you at my side the most still wondering what the hell was wrong.
They told me that you were useless and between you and your family i would never win the fight
It is now 5 months later and as hard as it is for me to admit everything They said about you was indeed right.

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nonners commented on They Told Me So


move on honey. your a good guy be tough.were all here for you. poems great

Lillixfan14 commented on They Told Me So


Wonderful! Beautiful! Its real and the person its to if they read it they'll love it! Keep up with the good writings!



The person i wrote it to wants nothing to do with me because her family " told her so"

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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