Away

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  • yage
  • Always and forever no matter where you are or where you decide to go. My love will be there with you, just wish the two of you would know

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My poem Away done over again, with some helpful insight. Thanks again!

Away

I’m walking away from the pain
the escape that which embodies me
seeking shelter in the rain
When you are surrounding thee

I’m running away
To forget everything
That has happened
Between you and I

I’m driving to create distance
To keep the peace.
Which is all we have left in this resistance
Rather silence, does cease.

I’m driving faster now, more than ever
my foot revs louder than before
The music's cranked blocking so clever
Words go unheard as the peddle hits the floor.

The engine's nears dying
These gears I keep grinding
This path you’ve chosen
Well my soul it keeps taking

Turning sharp far too quick
See nothing in front of me
Yet never look back
For I see my path now

Cold days of darkness
My foot made heavy with lead
This car's armory in a mess
This way of driving to end up dead.

One mighty crash
Huge ball of flames so bright
An explosion, a flash
A near blinding light

I'm now amidst pieces of this wreckage
That is known as your chaos causing havoc
For you’ve left and I’ve nothing to salvage
Never to return I hope it leaves you awestruck

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Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

yage’s Poems (49)

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Regrets 0
"I Do" 1
Today 0
Amber Nicole 0
Britney Jade 0
Pain 0
SSDD 1
Right Where I Started 1
Waiting for Her 0
In The End 1
My Baby and Me 1
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My Story 0
Still 1
The Wait 1
Running Rampid 1
Your Game 0
These Feelings 0
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Different 0
Too Little, Too Late 1
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Pain Of It All 0
Surreal 0
Now and Forever 1
My Broken Heart 0
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Realism 1
Redundant 1
Hope 1
Link 0
Goodbye 0
I'm Sorry 1
Wants 0
Stuck 0
Sitting Here 1
I'm Sorry 0
Suicide 1
We 0
Fool's Game 0
Dreaming of You 2
My Girls 0
My Mind 1
No Say 0
Now, and Forever 0
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My Muse 1