Redundant

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  • yage
  • Always and forever no matter where you are or where you decide to go. My love will be there with you, just wish the two of you would know

Poem Commentary

Realization, Depression, Jealous,

Redundant

My feelings are stronger than the Nile
That is one thing of which there is no denial
Has lasted through thick and thin, mile after mile
And shall last more than just a lil while

I wish this had come, but never passed
Yet you moved on so very fast
Replaced my role in your cast
As I held steady to our relationship mast

Now I live with regret and depression
My heart and mind goes into repression
Can't believe it took me so long to drink the potion
I was just so stuck on believing our notion

I really do wish you and yours the best baby
I'll always thank God for the chance he gave me
Wish I could have been the man they called Daddy
But that chance I blew, now not even a maybe

Cuz like old times when I wanted you back then
Instead of me, you went online to find men
This time its not Jeff, however it's just Ben
Never really had you then, and never shall have you ever again

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Tempy commented on Redundant

03-29-2010

this is heavy heart ache. Heavy hearts need support

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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