Shattered Heart

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    To Kathy, my birth mother. Through all we have been through and all I have endured at your hands I still held out hope that you could love me. Now I know I was wrong to ever think that possible. Good bye to you. Your disowned daughter.

    Shattered Heart

    You just don't know,
    How far I would go,
    To make you pay,
    On this very day,
    For all the wrongs you've done to my heart.

    It has been shattered.
    It has been broken.
    It has bled and been bruised.
    Oh the terrible things it has felt you do.

    You have crushed it.
    You have cut it.
    You have torn it in two.
    Tears of blood fall from wounds caused by you.

    Do you feel nothing?
    Why don't you care?
    You have hurt so many others.
    You cause nothing but pain and despair.

    So I am cutting all ties.
    We are no longer bound.
    Not by love nor through our blood.
    Now I am free.

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    poett commented on Shattered Heart

    12-04-2013

    I can identify with this poem in so many ways. I am just going to tell you about holding on to hate. The pain . Hate kill you inside. Try to pray n meditate and concentrate on the good things you learned and the great person you became. You don't need to forgive her but forgive yourself for letting the abuse n hurt be done to you. Then move on. If you have tried your best to forgive but she won't change just let go n don't look back but do not hate. If you feel hate she is still hurting you and getting away with it. You know something I truly learned. It was that we become stronger after dealing with so much pain. We become wiser to know better and not be mistreated again. To not expect them to love us when they can't even love themselves. Hugs and I believe you are a wonderful person. Don't let those bad memories control your soul n heart. Hugs

    Trista3

    12/04/2013

    Thank you. I don't hate my mother anymore. I use to, but i don't now. instead i am filled with longing for what i never did but should of had and confusion about what i will never understand and i am always afraid of losing another child in some way even though i got back the child she stole from me. hopefully the last will heal over time. you are a good person with a center of gold. the depth of your caring reads loudly for all those you touch with your words.

    Geremij commented on Shattered Heart

    10-30-2013

    It is really sad and emotional. I know I can't relate directly but I still can feel the emotions through the words

    Trista3

    11/28/2013

    thank you. I am glad the emotion reads through. try betrayal or treachery. I am pretty proud of those.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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