For Ardor

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For Ardor

 

For Ardor 

Your love elevates me, awakens me and enlightens me

Draw my trembling heart near to thee

Your touch, embraces and assures

Penetrate my sadness with your swelling strength

Your look is loving and promising

Preserve my soul in your buried blaze

Entangled me with your mysterious gaze

Immerse me in your secret fire

Prolong our ravenous desire

 

-M. Jacobs

 

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BringMeBullets commented on For Ardor

02-11-2010

This is really pretty as well. I love your work! You are a talented individual. Very nice.

danmartyjake1

02/14/2010

You are kind, thanks for finding, "For Ardor". All poems have some original spark that they come from. This one is very special to me.

Grito commented on For Ardor

12-11-2009

Hot and sweet, pure love's desire, as DMJ sets the house on fire!!!

danmartyjake1

12/21/2009

So glad to set the house on fire and whatever else that gets hot, certainly. We all need that. What else can I say. Thanks for your perspective and constant encouragement.

BadBadBear commented on For Ardor

12-09-2009

Your passion fire is lit with your unique penmanship. No one can deny the fact .. your pen tip oozes volcanic lava.

danmartyjake1

12/10/2009

I am so grateful for your comments, as You are the Volcanic one, for sure. I enjoy reading your prose and I am honored that I lit that fire for you, as well. ty

knight4696 commented on For Ardor

12-09-2009

You certainly have a way with words!! a Very sensual poem indeed. A lot being said in such few words! Very Nicely written! ..... Ken

danmartyjake1

12/10/2009

Ken, I am grateful that you enjoyed my poem and thought of it as sensual. I was capturing and sealing a memory for myself. ty

BrittKun commented on For Ardor

12-08-2009

Very nice. A passionate piece lovely wording. Overall nice poem!!! : )

danmartyjake1

12/08/2009

Thanks, Britt. I appreciate your comments.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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