Pirate Love

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My latest offering. Hope you like it!

Pirate Love

 

Hearts soared and sank,

concurrently.

Joy and anguish exploding,

spilling over.

Hate and adoration

of your embrace

spins me torn,

as a lush rose

that shatters skin

with its bitter thorn. 

Withdrawing,

leaving your promise,

for me to return.

Resisting your allure

for a moment,

against torment,

knowing we’ll burn.

Quenching our desire

in everlasting fire.

Consuming our will,

Imperfect, until we are one.

No matter the cost,

what is gained or lost.

Foretold, predicted,

feared and rejected,

a fated longing that

could not be accepted,

or escaped….

 

-M.Jacobs

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ApaqRasgirl commented on Pirate Love

05-06-2010

wow, terrific piece, your words painted a powerful image. great job. thanks for sharing. love Asha

danmartyjake1

05/07/2010

Glad you enjoyed "Pirate Love". It's comfortable for me because it seems like it comes from a past life. I appreciate your comments.

KtIrish commented on Pirate Love

05-05-2010

I really like this. It sucked me in and spun me through such intensity. Its beautiful work. Well done.

danmartyjake1

05/06/2010

Many thanks, KtIrish! I really am grateful you checked it out. Love to hear from you on some others along the same lines as "Pirate Love". I will check out your page, as well.

soulwriter commented on Pirate Love

05-05-2010

Stolen, and pirated for pleasure - taken for self measure. Once again your pen releases what your mind sees and the reader is blessed to experience it all.... "spins me torn, as a lush rose that shatters skin with its bitter thorn." You captured my attention with this stanza. 10

danmartyjake1

05/06/2010

Thanks Soulwriter!. Don't know how I did this one, except to reference a past life experience, I suppose. Thanks for your heartfelt words.

markrohaley commented on Pirate Love

02-26-2010

yeah that is the place where souls will waste...a eternal loss with nashing of teeth and bald heads...

danmartyjake1

02/26/2010

I'm not sure if that means you liked it or hated it, but thanks for reading," Pirate Love".

stever commented on Pirate Love

02-25-2010

this is a very lovely love sick longing type poem ..i think...i like it alot..StEvEr

danmartyjake1

02/25/2010

I am glad you noticed "Pirate Love" . Thanks for commenting on it.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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