Poem Commentary

An attempt to decompress, express and share in words what I feel sometimes at situations and people who have insatiable appetites for control and are envious of others so they rage.
This is a healthy way to send it out and release it.

Rage


As my thoughts fly through the razored air

As my heart slows to cry beyond your

blind and wanton stare

A simple aggression with a nudge of rejection

 Shows painfully, you don’t care

Rage

Lives in your reflection within its refutation

As denunciation grows upon one, so fair

Mysterious how fascination can quickly ripen and

rot into invasion, you so carelessly dare

Rage

Irresponsible, incomprehendable and daunt

Transgression, false accusation, empty negotiation

Character assassination……

Your sweetest rouse will not awaken or repair

Rage

Haunting fury, blowing ravenous frenzy

Fuming rant and ageless envy

Boiling wrath on an endless flurry

Seething thunder  from turmoil deep under

Your veil is thinning your temper beginning

You have no where to go, save your ridiculous flare

Put you in an early grave, so don’t go there

 

-M. Jacobs

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Artie commented on Rage

12-03-2009

This is a great piece!! The last stanza was my favorite - very powerful - we can all relate - 10 from me

danmartyjake1

12/03/2009

thanks so much Artie, where you been/Great to hear from you.

icu2 commented on Rage

12-03-2009

This is a really well thought out, expressive rant. I love it and totally feel the rage. Very well done. Great poem.

danmartyjake1

12/03/2009

Thanks for reading and your comments

danmartyjake1

12/03/2009

Thanks for reading and your comments

stellar commented on Rage

12-03-2009

PErfect...! You catch the essence of rage...and i am to is enrage...Great write ^_^ v

danmartyjake1

12/03/2009

thanks so much for reading and your comments

Marsink commented on Rage

12-02-2009

Rant Against Goading Expectations!!! What else is there to say of such a succinct and explosive piece? Thanks for sharing that which may not be a flattereing confession, but is common to all at one time or another.

danmartyjake1

12/03/2009

Def not a flattering emotion at all, but needs to be expressed to move on, thanks

jademelissa74 commented on Rage

12-02-2009

....how empty to deny the rage for living like some blinded sage and never once to voice the cry...are we loved or do they lie? Wow! This is an amzing write Ms. Jacobs! Simply poetic!

danmartyjake1

12/03/2009

thank you for reading it and for your encouragement

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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