Breaking In Each Other's Arms

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    A poem that I didn't think I would ever finish, but look at that. I actually did.

    Breaking In Each Other's Arms

    You’ll rest softly in my arms,
    The one I’ve always wanted,
    I’ll keep you safe from harm,
    Isn’t that what I’ve always dreamed of?

    Sometimes
    People lie
    To keep what they want
    From a world of harm
    Sometimes
    Our mouths deceive us
    And hide the best part
    From a worthy audience

    I believe
    Something out there will teach us
    To be human
    And I can see
    You and I growing up with each other
    In front of an audience
    I Believe is worthy to watch the magic.

    And we’ve just begun
    A path of destruction that will destroy
    All things we hate and love
    But we will start a new
    We’ll find a new world
    And melt in it together.

    Our dreams will break,
    And so will our minds.
    But we can break in each other’s arms.
    That’s what we’ve always needed,
    Each other
    Two hearts pulsing in the darkness
    As one.

    By: Brandi Deacon
    2009

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    dahlusion commented on Breaking In Each Other's Arms

    03-01-2010

    "That’s what we’ve always needed, Each other Two hearts pulsing in the darkness As one" — beautiful poetic and deeply sexy.

    BringMeBullets

    03/02/2010

    Thank you, Dah. Kind soul...

    mdpoetgirl commented on Breaking In Each Other's Arms

    02-22-2010

    Simply beautiful........ I like your writing style ;-)

    BringMeBullets

    02/22/2010

    Thank you so much. :) It really means a lot.

    Jayandben commented on Breaking In Each Other's Arms

    11-11-2009

    You are officially my new favorite poet (you should be blushing. It was Edgar Allen Poe before)

    BringMeBullets

    11/12/2009

    Oh my gosh! Thank you! You are being so nice! He he. I LOVE Edgar Allen Poe. he is excellent, there is no way that you could like me over him. :)

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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