My Pet

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  • Erotic

    Poem Commentary

    This is for someone... Special. :)

    My Pet

    Come here, my pet.
    Bring me the roses of your heart.
    I never thought that revenge would
    take the form of red rain.

    Let us take them by force.
    Come in as millions.
    Let them feed us their souls,
    they're as sweet as sugar cane.

    Come here, my darling.
    We've much work to do.
    Must close all the windows
    so they can't see us making love.

    And when we're done.
    It smells of summer.
    Flowers are blooming preparing to birth
    sweet, poisonous apples.

    Dare we dine on each other's
    sweet after-love thoughts?
    So much I wish to dig my nails into you.
    Come here, my pet.

    By: Brandi Deacon
    2010

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    xborntobeweirdx commented on My Pet

    03-22-2010

    Love this, very well written, an original. Kudos my dear ^_^

    BringMeBullets

    03/22/2010

    Thank you so much! :D

    Springsize commented on My Pet

    03-04-2010

    You have a very nice gift to write -- the first poem I read of yours, about the little broken winged one by the ocean so touched me... you reflect the youth of today with big wide eyes, looking for truth. This poem, specifically takes Reader into rooms that were never seen before 1952, when o' Ricky 'n Lucy slipped the public a view, called two beds, it was true, so sad the way woman could not enjoy too... You bring the role of woman, unafraid to experience pleasure in This Century. Your writing is nicely abstract attached to realism, using specifically, "like flowers are preparing to birth, sweet poison apples"... like eve

    BringMeBullets

    03/05/2010

    Thank you, Spring. I am not afraid to be expressive. It shows just how powerful a person really is. I want to be powerful. :) But only through writing, nothing else.

    RJK commented on My Pet

    03-04-2010

    Passion, yes. A hunger that is trying to be feed but dose the feeding ever fill the need?

    BringMeBullets

    03/04/2010

    Hardly ever... It doesn't last very long.

    dannyboy22 commented on My Pet

    03-04-2010

    Erotic and dark .. a fine combination!! I wonder if that is what it's like to be with a vampire? Great write.

    BringMeBullets

    03/04/2010

    Ahhh... I wish I was a vampire. :) Thank you.

    Musicmynded1 commented on My Pet

    03-04-2010

    ................................................................meow!

    BringMeBullets

    03/04/2010

    He he. I love the simplicity of your comments...

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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