The Rabbit Hunter


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    The Rabbit Hunter

    I hunt him
    without causing an inch of shudder.
    I don't understand him completely,
    but it's always gotten me through anyway.
    You could compare me to a rabbit hunter,
    if you so desire,
    because when my heart locks on target,
    it's almost impossible to stop.
    He is like a rabbit:
    nervous eyes,
    rapidly pounding heart,
    quick body tremblings.
    And I still can't understand him,
    so I hunt him,
    until I do.

    By: Brandi Deacon

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    Skite commented on The Rabbit Hunter


    I need your secrets to go haunting myself..:) I still cant understanding him..if you say so, I



    I thank you much, Skite.

    dahlusion commented on The Rabbit Hunter


    This poem is raw passion and passionate hunger: "because when my heart locks on target, it's almost impossible to stop" — whew! such a lucky boy.



    Ha ha. Thank you, Dah. :)

    Jayandben commented on The Rabbit Hunter


    Oooooh :) Nice homeric simileeeee :D I never would have put those two things together, but now that I read them that way it makes absolutely perfect sense



    I try to think of things that people normally wouldn't even think of putting into poetry. This is what I come up with. Ha ha. Thanks for reading.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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