Lamb

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    Lamb

     I am your lamb... Lost in a pasture.
    Bleeding the love for you that I can never show.
    They strip me of my wool, leaving me naked.
    Words like "hate" and "deceive" are carved into
    my pink skin.
    I walk past the horses
    that shake their heads in shame
    at the site of a bloodied lamb
    with no name,
    no purpose.
    Until one day
    the farmer grows hungry.
    He takes me to a big wooden shed,
    and I see the silhouettes and carcasses hanging
    from rusted hooks
    screwed into the ceiling.
    With my last breath,
    I confessed
    that the lamb I was
    couldn't be more than
    a lamb lost in a pasture...
    Searching for someone
    that will accept me for who I am.

    By: Brandi Deacon
    2010

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on Lamb

    12-15-2012

    I come back to this poem often, because I love it so much and mostly because I think at some point in our journey we all can relate. You're very talented. Would like to read more from you. Take care.
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    TREVON commented on Lamb

    01-05-2011

    I can feel the pain of the lamb, I at one time was a lamb. I really like this poem.
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    BringMeBullets

    03/25/2011

    Thank you. :)

    iLuvPoetryJACOB commented on Lamb

    06-14-2010

    I can relate so well to this poem. Yet another great write from you. --Natalie.
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    BringMeBullets

    06/18/2010

    Thank you much, Natalie.

    BlackButterfly1 commented on Lamb

    05-21-2010

    This is beautiful!! It's symbolic for life and the way people judge us without understanding our stories... "I walk past the horses that shake their heads in shame/at the site of a bloodied lamb with no name." Fantastic writing B. Each time I find a favorite I keep reading and then find another, and another lol.
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    BringMeBullets

    06/18/2010

    Thank you...

    Dano commented on Lamb

    04-19-2010

    these words scream at top volume to me... once again an amazing write
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    BringMeBullets

    04/19/2010

    Thank you so much. :)

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