Untitled I

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    Untitled I

    A heartbeat.
    A pulse.
    Breath of life to behold.
    The music of my heart swells.
    And your eyes close,
    fading to dark.
    Sleep took you under it's feathered wing.
    And kept you safe from the outside world.
    Had I'd known you would be mine,
    I would have settled down a lot sooner.

    By: Brandi Deacon
    2010

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    MindNumbing commented on Untitled I

    02-10-2010

    This is beautiful...... Bravo!....... 10 from me.

    BringMeBullets

    02/11/2010

    Thank you much, MN.

    danmartyjake1 commented on Untitled I

    02-10-2010

    THis is an eerie and interesting write. Mysterious. I really liked it!

    BringMeBullets

    02/11/2010

    Thank you so much. :)

    Rhymer commented on Untitled I

    02-09-2010

    This poem tells so much in so few lines. 10 from me.

    BringMeBullets

    02/10/2010

    Thank you very much. It means a lot to me.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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