The Cherry Blossom Inn

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    I apologize for words that aren't spelled right. I was in a hurry.

    The Cherry Blossom Inn

    The walls looked light, like styrofoam,
    and the chunks of cedar hold it up.
    Paper lamps hang from the ceiling,
    crunching into the next level of red.
    The bed looks soft and warm,
    and the air smells of herbs and tea.
    Small pictures of landscapes and Bonsia trees decorate the walls.
    But not too much.
    A window is provided for minimum viewing of how big the town really is.
    I watch the yellow light filter in.
    I become captivated as it spills over a coffee table
    The lush carpet cradles my tired feet as I settle for rest
    at the Cherry Blossom Inn.

    By: Brandi Deacon
    2010

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    danmartyjake1 commented on The Cherry Blossom Inn

    02-10-2010

    Unique, endearing and conjours so much up for the soul to feast upon. Thank You!

    BringMeBullets

    02/11/2010

    Thank you for reading. :)

    dahlusion commented on The Cherry Blossom Inn

    01-29-2010

    Beautifully surreal in all of its poetic meandering. Reflective. Drowsy. Dusted with warm light.

    BringMeBullets

    02/02/2010

    That's what I was going for. Thank you very much for taking time to read my work.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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