What I Want Is

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    What I Want Is

    What I want is
    Enough time

    To make you
    See how I can love you

    What I want is
    To believe that

    Someday I could
    belong to you

    If only you knew
    That I could love you

    Like no one else
    And I could be

    everything you'd
    dream of

    What I want is
    a chance

    to change what
    you've come to know

    to something
    you can fall in love with.

    By: Brandi Deacon
    2009

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    dahlusion commented on What I Want Is

    01-29-2010

    A powerful poetic crying out to love, to dreams, to the sweet taste of a long deep kiss.

    BringMeBullets

    02/02/2010

    Very much so. And again, thank you. :D

    Jayandben commented on What I Want Is

    11-11-2009

    :) You are an amazing poet. I'm sure you will get your chance if you haven't already and it will be wonderful. Good job :)

    BringMeBullets

    11/12/2009

    Thank you for reading. It really does mean a lot to me. :)

    cliftondurant commented on What I Want Is

    11-02-2009

    nice poem someone are lucky that you care about i hope that he return your love good job

    BringMeBullets

    11/03/2009

    Thank you.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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