• Birth


    I was born broken
    into a shattered world.
    Pulses race along white tile and green scrubs.
    My eyes opened and I saw
    others like me that were broken.
    My hands,
    for anything I could have.
    Fragile fingers
    shaking in the still air.
    It wasn't the best place to be,
    but I could say that I was
    in an unshaken world.
    Where the people operate like robots
    and the air is acidic.
    And the ash
    falls like snow.

    By: Brandi Deacon

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    TREVON commented on Shaken


    Excellant I felt every word, from the place it was written. Trevon



    Thank you. :)

    Crush commented on Shaken


    everytime i read you, i know i will be taken to your big world, your small world. i know that i will feel something new....something deep, sad or sadder. my heart goes out to you . sometimes i can feel hope, i pray that my feelings are correct. thank you, bring me bullets. easy 10 !



    Thank you so much. :) Sometimes I can see a light, and I hope I'm not imagining such an amazing thing... But I think it's real, and I think your hope is too..

    Dano commented on Shaken


    yet again another fine example of talent... thanks for sharing



    Thank you for reading. :)

    reyjamiei commented on Shaken


    ...wonderful poem....i really enjoy your work...thanks for sharing...



    Thank you so much.

    ginga commented on Shaken


    bullets, This poem does shake the reader. To think that a young innocent babe would have to feel shaken from the start.A very interesting take on bringing kids into the world. ginga



    Thank you.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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