Untilted IV
I'm my father's alternative,my mother's greatest achievement.
My brother's worst nightmare,
and my boyfriend's convenience.
By: Brandi Deacon
2011
Untilted IV
2 Comments
Tags: Life
Poem Commentary
Nothing to say. I think this poem speaks for itself.my mother's greatest achievement.
My brother's worst nightmare,
and my boyfriend's convenience.
By: Brandi Deacon
2011
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ManOnTheMoon commented on Untilted IV
07-29-2011
- There is a phrase that is brought to mind when I read this, "Simplicity is elegance.", and this rings true to that, for so much said in such a little space.
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08/28/2011
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Ming commented on Untilted IV
04-07-2011
- To the point . . . Great expression . . . -Ming
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04/07/2011
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