Untilted IV

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    Nothing to say. I think this poem speaks for itself.

    Untilted IV

    I'm my father's alternative,
    my mother's greatest achievement.
    My brother's worst nightmare,
    and my boyfriend's convenience.

    By: Brandi Deacon
    2011

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    ManOnTheMoon commented on Untilted IV

    07-29-2011

    There is a phrase that is brought to mind when I read this, "Simplicity is elegance.", and this rings true to that, for so much said in such a little space.

    BringMeBullets

    08/28/2011

    Well thank you so much!

    Ming commented on Untilted IV

    04-07-2011

    To the point . . . Great expression . . . -Ming

    BringMeBullets

    04/07/2011

    Thank you, Ming. :)

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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