Restless Haiku


  • Longing

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    I tried my very first haiku. Not sure if it's good or not.

    Restless Haiku

    Restless, Relapse in
    These words that take breath away.
    Prevent pain in life.

    Your eyes, get to me.
    A sudden being myself
    dies, but still lives on.

    By: Brandi Deacon

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    KagenoKitsune commented on Restless Haiku


    i am liking this haiku of restless scilence of the spirit during the noise of the mind



    Thank you so much! :)

    danmartyjake1 commented on Restless Haiku


    Great Haiku. I have never been too good at it. But I enjoyed yours...



    Thank you very much. :)

    dahlusion commented on Restless Haiku


    Perfect in form. My mind wonders. Suddenly, understanding.



    Thank you. I'm honored to know that you've read it. :) It means a lot.

    BringMeBullets commented on Restless Haiku


    Thank you. That's very sweet of you to comment. I don't do these kinds of poems very often...First attempt. lol

    kpeery09 commented on Restless Haiku


    Very Nice me liky liky...keep it up buddy. I give you 10

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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