my addiction

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    67 camaro...my first true love

    my addiction

    God, I love your wicked lines
    and the way that smooth skin shines
    I'll slide in, loving the way my ass slips
    across leather, hot
    are you ready for this?
    it's the last warning you're gonna get.
    shhh, baby don't talk
    there's nothing I need to be told
    just sit back...watch what I can do
    feel the rumble between my thighs
    as I rev you up
    watch my delicate fingers wrap around your stick
    yeah, you like watching that
    as I drop it into gear
    and blaze that burning trail
    to show that I was here
    I'm gonna push that red-line
    motor racing into second
    I chuckle softly, quietly
    as the weight of you pushes me
    back
    and together we scream into third
    then fourth
    and the needle climbs higher
    and higher
    with a firm stroke I slam you in
    to fifth gear
    and we cruise
    the wind blowing my hair in my mouth
    and in a wild tangle around my head
    exhilaration peaking
    like an explosion of joy
    wild I am
    laughter full throated
    full throttle
    pedal to the floor
    artless graceful handling
    the way I turn your wheel
    every banking curve
    like a drug, a rush, I feel
    alive
    and I can drive it baby
    faster
    than you ever will
    I am reckless
    abandon embodied
    pistons pumping
    speakers thumping
    feel my deepest need
    and feed me
    SPEED

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    captaininsight commented on my addiction

    07-27-2009

    Well I don't know which was better the car or the poem, I kid. Another fine piece of work great pace . It had me hanginn on with my seetbelt on.

    captaininsight

    07/27/2009

    I can't spell

    Qualin commented on my addiction

    07-27-2009

    GOD I WOULDN'T USE YOUR NAME... EVEN AS AN EXCLIMATION ....THE ONLY TIME EXCEPTABLE... IS DURING DESPERATION....FOR THOSE WHO ARE EXCITED ...BY THESE WORDS THAT SEEMS EXCITING... WILL EVENTUALLY FIND OUT ... THEY REALLY ARE INVITING......QUALIN TALENTED POET...WHICH DIRECTION ?

    soulwriter commented on my addiction

    07-27-2009

    Ah my love when young, a 72 Monte Carlo with a 350 4 barrel - though I had a second love for my best friends car 69 Red Camero. I felt the need for speed and I got a bit revved up in the memories of hot cars and all the adventures of where the roads of few responsibilities took me. Well written - what would the custom license plate read?? Safe driving

    tenderpoison

    07/27/2009

    tndrpsn duh! :)

    HarverTomsson commented on my addiction

    07-27-2009

    I keep forgetting, is it hot women in fast cars, or fast women in hot cars?! I have a few private reserve lables to be played only in the triple digits. Can U dig it?

    Dreamer123 commented on my addiction

    07-26-2009

    really cool i like it your car as your true first love this is awesome :D this is hot! ahahahah this is tight girl keep writing God Bless you

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