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    An Ode to StudlyVonFieldMarshall111DildoPic

    crazed nemesis of poetry
    would be
    dictator of creativity
    caged in rules
    so random made
    don't you know yet
    poets are all about
    breaking chains?

    my gift no further waste
    on thee
    a few lines only
    so you can see
    this song
    I think
    they wrote
    for
    you



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    Dano commented on An Ode to StudlyVonFieldMarshall111DildoPic

    01-31-2011

    a shot to the chin is what he needs... nicely said

    tenderpoison

    01/31/2011

    who knows what he needs, what he should have figured out by now is that he's not going to get it here. Thanks for reading :)

    ginga commented on An Ode to StudlyVonFieldMarshall111DildoPic

    01-29-2011

    tender, The summation fits into poetic form so explicitly. Your theme is delivered with precision. ginga

    tenderpoison

    01/30/2011

    Thanks Ginga - I know maybe better to let sleeping dogs lie, but really?.....ugh.........

    spbsdude commented on An Ode to StudlyVonFieldMarshall111DildoPic

    01-28-2011

    Short, but very revealing and it is true that we as poets don't follow rules, we write from the heart, and was it you who said we bleed from the pen? Anyway, very nice.

    tenderpoison

    01/28/2011

    I'm sure I'm not the first to say our pens bleed heart's blood - thanks for reading Dude :) hope your day is going well...

    MindNumbing commented on An Ode to StudlyVonFieldMarshall111DildoPic

    01-28-2011

    HAHAHA!!!! Nice!

    tenderpoison

    01/28/2011

    it needed to be said :)

    JadedJezzabel commented on An Ode to StudlyVonFieldMarshall111DildoPic

    01-27-2011

    right on girl.........hes a poetry nazi......................................

    tenderpoison

    01/29/2011

    yep...for starters :)

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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