glass beach

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glass beach

shattered, broken shards
of lost purpose
useless rubble
tossed to the hungry waves
we languish
despaired of
like unwanted rubbish
forgotten days
when they were something other
something to be treasured
and handled with care
our sharp edges draw blood
so we are discarded
banished
denied fulfillment
neither contained
or able to contain
we are glass
scattered on a beach
in hopes the sea will swallow us
and then go still
as though we never mattered
at all
but the sea has other plans
we are tumbled against each other
sharp edges worn away
we are smoothed
reshaped
until only our color remains
and the artist comes seeking
as we reveal ourselves
in the sun's light
in brilliant flashes
of red
or green
amber and blue
we are scintillating
when our true color shines
and we are chosen
for the artist's work
together we transcend
our brokeness

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mary1644 commented on glass beach

08-13-2009

Wonderful uplifting poem - arising from the ashes as so many of us have. Such a good expression of truth.

dragonfly1023 commented on glass beach

07-23-2009

this is one of the best analogies on life I've ever read. you've got exceptional gifts of imagination and presentation tenderpoison. this is an instant classic for me. 10 for sure

tenderpoison

07/23/2009

thank you for your kind words.

Hampton commented on glass beach

07-12-2009

You made something beautiful from broken and discarded pieces of glass. The images are clearly displayed to the reader as the poem progresses.

UnworthyFather commented on glass beach

07-08-2009

Tender, this poem to me is very recondite, and yet it is very simple in it's presentation and truths. I find this to be superb craftsmanship. Terrific write. Thanks for sharing. 10

cat8rat74 commented on glass beach

07-07-2009

This is a wondeful piece! A masterpiece! .

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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