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bone like bleached sand and desicated remains...


i am all the proof you need
to survive the fire on the roof
it's free
you didnt see it
when you had the chance
on the night of our last dance
you couldnt have known
our time had come around
too young to be afraid
with a gun in our hand
loaded and high
and running out of land
i perspired into your dark climax
and stole a second from you
i dont plan on giving back
all we ever had
was the sorcerous night
when we made evil things happen
and explode into crystal light
sweat and near blood breath
beneath a speckled gray and white sky
backdrop of desert
and eagles circling
wingtips reaching
watching you breathing
cold dry air crisping
emotion worth feeling
the hollow hallow of two souls being

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scrye commented on Bone


Depth, emotion, strength, imagery, prose all it needed was a master poet to craft it into a great piece of work and you did it all so well great work amad. Keep posting you know i'll read i absolutly love your work. Bravo

HopeOhlarik commented on Bone


very well written wolfie, you really painted a picture in my head as i read!

latinangel commented on Bone


Wow!!!!Wolfie!!!The imagery in this one is wonderful. As always your flow of words intrigues me and keeps me reading holding my breath from beginning to end. I would really love to have one of your poems on my website. This one is going into my favorites.



thank you so much latin, i think my newest one INSIDER

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

AmadeusEx’s Poems (89)

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Ladykiller 14
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23 Seconds 14
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Only So Far 4
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