Rainbow Warrior

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    just shooting for some interesting images in this one

    Rainbow Warrior

    i believe
    in samurai's flashing knives
    in the dark heart of egypt
    painted faces redolent
    with perfume
    don helmets belching
    fire and brimstone
    ages of antiquity
    brought to life
    beneath the hoe of a blade
    and a scalpers knife
    all the reasons
    to leave earth and fly
    into the sky
    plant your hearth 
    rain down obscenities
    dark
    romantic
    soulful identities
    flutter to you
    bathe you in pure light
    cleanse your soul
    and honor your tithe to the heavens in blood
    with each warrior howl
    wielding sword and maul
    the sun erupts
    and spews galaxies
    a moment split
    between foes and allies
    a sacred pact
    a bond of fire
    ignites in your belly
    and carries you higher...

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    baddollyr2 commented on Rainbow Warrior

    06-30-2009

    nice imagery you have going on here. like a little fire going on

    Desmotti commented on Rainbow Warrior

    06-30-2009

    That was sweet...I really enjoyed the imagery of the Sun exploding into galaxies...way sweet...I had a dream of something similar...The moon broke into three moons and then morphed into a sun that looked like an Atom with protons and neutrons flyen around it...and then a wave of fire flushed the surface and I woke up.

    BDIsernhagen commented on Rainbow Warrior

    06-29-2009

    wonderful imagery, kinda reminds me of a coherent Jim Morrison, spoken in a full voice of static silence over still water...

    AmadeusEx

    06/29/2009

    now when i read this, i cant help but hear jim morrison saying it...lol..thanks for that great visual audio mindclip

    quise commented on Rainbow Warrior

    06-27-2009

    these discriptions are the best i can picture all the things your were discribing it is really great to picture great poem

    SmileyAngel138 commented on Rainbow Warrior

    06-27-2009

    i like the words and descriptions that you give you almost paint a picture with ur words...great job :-)

    AmadeusEx

    06/29/2009

    thank you angel, keep reading and rating, i love every comment i get

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