The Infinite Appeal

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    before everything you love sours, you felt this at least once

    The Infinite Appeal

    your small feet crush the violets
    so petite
    i shiver at the violence of your
    holocaust...indiscrete
    but im lost
    in the blossom of your breasts
    so hard to remember
    what happens next
    that afternoon spent
    hot as a fever
    pressed against you like
    a raft on a river
    reach into your basket
    pull an arrow from your quiver
    in the warm light of morning
    i suck in as you shiver
    and roll in the ashes
    of last nights fire
    my skin smoked and gray i
    penetrate further
    your laughter like butter
    golden and mellow im so
    into you i cant escape
    this feeling its as if im
    dreaming you into existence
    then i feel your soft shoulder
    and your salty inner thigh
    and i know im alive
    with you by my side on a
    hillside of grass scratching
    my backside your giggles tickling
    everything i have to give
    i slide my hands up your firm ribs
    and grasp....

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    ShanneN commented on The Infinite Appeal

    07-14-2010

    well writtin, great job! i agree with what Artie said =)

    Artie commented on The Infinite Appeal

    07-09-2010

    Well done. Everything is there, but not on a vulgar display - 10 from me

    phantom commented on The Infinite Appeal

    07-09-2010

    dis poem had a lot of emotion and details in it great write..............

    brokenhearted11 commented on The Infinite Appeal

    07-09-2010

    beautiful write. its sexy, but without being... well, yknow, porno. great job. keep writing :)

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